Helmer: Nora my sweet little one please stay with me and the children don't LEAVE !!! ( as he yelled)
Nora: No honey the way you treat me is not the way I wanted my life and as for the children they don't even like me......
Helmer: Really ? The kids love you and so do I ! I will change I will do anything for you to stay please Nora please ! ( as he starts to cry ) DONT LEAVE ME !
Nora: I'm sorry Helmer it's about that time for me to think things over so now I'm going to start living with my parents ( as she starts to leave )
Helmer: Nora please don't go ! ( as Nora leaves )
Nora: Goodbye Helmer !
I wrote on Jason Ashley Donato and jpariona lol
First Post by Tuesday, 11:59PM
10 years ago
9 comments:
You last blog was really good. That was an interesting ending to the story. Your right Helmer should have been left to cry after Nora was a good wife.
I like the story for the ending of act 4 and the ending! good job
your blog was good. Helmer should have been left to cry because Nora was such a good wife.
I like they ending. You can write a little more to make it more dramatic. But i do like how helmer cried. Now a days you don't see a guy cry over a girl.
Nice ending bro. I agree with you, helmer should have been left to cry because Nora was a decent wife
I would have let her leave if I was Helmer. Nora is such a Thotty going behind Helmer's back with Dr. Rank. Also now he will have more money because he doesn't have to worry about her spending it as soon as he makes it!
It's a shame Helmer had to learn the hard way. I'd leave him too if he treated me that way. Good job!
I agree with you because it is a good thing that Helmer was been left by himself because he like to be the best and the boss always, over everything....BRAVO!
Good job amilcar, this was a really good ending. She stood up for herself and what she thought was best for her.
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